Is this good enough to show to a professional?

I wrote this a few weeks ago and i'm trying to improve it. I think it
is ready to show to someone who can help me make a song out of it.Give
your opinion please!

I think you should know
I just wanted to impress you
never wanted to be your shadow
neither to play your fool
My dreams were killed
by your mad, careless words
my heart is completely filled
with many, many sad chords

(chorus)
I can be someone
that you'll hate
make you feel alone
and taste my fate

After what you've done to me
I just want to say
You won't leave again, free
and now you'll pay
When i close my eyes at night
I remember how i'm alone
Remember all our fights
I just wish you were gone

(chorus)

I can be someone
you'll hate
if you will make excuses
you're too late